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Re: Literary Merit
Have you tried any Jane Austen?
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Luka Smith and Phillip Laurier
Erm, yes. It is a bit romantic looking. But I applaud your awesomesauce drawing skills! *claps* Just a few points... 1.) Is Luka a girl? He looks extremely feminine. Not ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Test of Humanity
Whoa. :shock: Those are some biiiiggg paragraphs. Not only does this look intimidating, it is also the incorrect way to format. Whenever someone new is talking, start a new paragraph. ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: 19 minutes by Jodi Picoult
Meh. It was alright. Definitely not her best. Same basic theme as her other novels -- if you've read one Picoult, you've read them all. As much as I thought ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: My first shading
I understand he has a mask on. He is Kakashi from Naruto, yes? What I'm trying to point out is how one-shaded the shading is. ^_^ Look at the mask. ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Blood
Mixtecs Assuming this is the happy medium between Aztecs and Mayas? :wink: Of course, historically speaking, this ethnic group makes much more sense.
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Free
Hmm. Thank ye very much, April. :) I'm not quite sure I see the fragments you're talking about... But thanks again. :) An edited version will be up shortly.
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
It's just the standard combination of English and Latin we've come to know and love. The letter k kind-of existed in Greek, but the Romans did not have it. So, ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
No, Kronos is the correct GREEK spelling. The problem is, Athena is a Latin/English-tized spelling. If he wanted all of his names to seem Greek, he would have called Athena ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: My Sole Reason For Suicide [Chapter One. Kitten]
Alright. I am in more of over all mood today, and since you've already got most of your nit-picky grammar issues out of the way, this is going to be ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Dusk - still under construction.
Didn't you post this in Fantasy Fiction? I remember reviewing it... In the futrue, feel free to have a moderator move a piece to another sub-forum for you. Best, Antigone
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
These books make me want to hurt people. He totally screwed up his mythology, mixes traditional and Latinized spellings, and the writing was just corny. But it was mostly the ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Free
Lily Moore -- I completely agree with everything you said. I'm well aware that the poor abused child card is played a bit to often. But I felt it would ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: The Emo Angst of an Angsty Emo
You are so epic. --Antigone Psh, you know I can't review poetry.
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Free
For Rosey's contest, and my first short fiction story voluntarily written. :D She will not look back. Her footsteps pit pat throughout the cave, bouncing off the stalactites and into ...
Jun 18, 2009
